Very good.the very first paragraph says 'characters' where i think it's meant to say 'audience' (change that)at the end you talk about narrative being diegetic but normally it's non-diegetic so change that too/make it clearer.Otherwise excellent. High Level 3, creeping into 4. (A/B)
Very good.
ReplyDeletethe very first paragraph says 'characters' where i think it's meant to say 'audience' (change that)
at the end you talk about narrative being diegetic but normally it's non-diegetic so change that too/make it clearer.
Otherwise excellent. High Level 3, creeping into 4. (A/B)